novaprospect 15 Posted July 25, 2018 (edited) Our Story Begins Here... (The Tale of Dragonhawk) Edited July 25, 2018 by novaprospect Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheDemon 109 Posted July 31, 2018 Well, that is an original method to put a story here. And it is good. Poor Sebastian. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Silcore 22 Posted July 31, 2018 Fantastic post. The sound design is great. Even invoked a few chills. Great job. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Romeo 320 Posted July 31, 2018 Cool! Great job on editing this. Good story, good pauses, nicely written and generally just enjoyable. Only thing and that's when you're nitpicking and it really isn't story related is the sound editing, you could've toned down the ambience (background music for instance) so that your voice gets the dominant say in it all, but it really isn't anything to complain about. If you'd lower it with 2-3 dbz, you'll have professional stuff right here man! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
novaprospect 15 Posted August 1, 2018 Thanks guys! All good feedback and thank you for the compliments. If you're interested in being a part of Bravo Company, I'm putting together a lot of things like this. Audio Diaries in between events, in-depth and non-linear story lines where your characters choices effect the guild and it's missions. I worked really hard on this, and it's to offer an experience that's hopefully unlike any other. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
StrikingSpear 53 Posted August 1, 2018 Truly incredible stuff here, Nova. Keep it up! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
